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Submitted: December 30, 2006
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Make: SONY
Model: DSC-H1
Shutter Speed: 10/600 second
F Number: F/3.5
Focal Length: 17 mm
ISO Speed: 64
Date Picture Taken: Dec 30, 2006, 4:36:12 PM

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My cousin Brittney after a wedding.
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So the focus of the picture is obviously your cousin as the rest of anything substantiate is blurred out into obscurity.

I’d recommend in the future adding more pizzazz to the photo. Her pose is lazy and huddled over and her face although rather cute; is one of bored dreary disinterest. Centering here on that tacky fence post would have also forced the viewers attention on her and not permit to cater off to the side to observe the less then interesting back and foreground of the image.

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Thanks for the comment!

I agree about the lazy pose, but thats about as good as you can get with her :)

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I like the way our eye is drawn to the fence at first and then to her, creating a sort of movement around the piece :)

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Thanks for the comment! :)

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Is she really sitting on the fence? For some reason it looks foreign to have her there...I am not sure if I can explain it. Maybe she doesn't look like she should be there. Lovely girl tho!

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Yes, it's actually part of a small bridge that she is sitting on.

I think thats one of the things I like the most about this picture. She looks so out of place, but I think it works well with this pic.

Thanks for the comment! :)

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Oh!!! Then it is the color that threw me. I thought that it may have been manipulated or something!!! Gotcha! :thumbsup:

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Wow, I absolutely love how its kind of darker and the bridge is orange. That is beautiful. She's gorgeous too!

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A yellow fence. Uncommon. :P

As the first commenter touched upon, I too would like to see a sharper background. Just because the photo has a focus doesn't mean you should get rid of the other stuff. :)

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